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Class 4.37 February 2023 (by K Virdee (kvirdee)) |
Chopping and changing
When writing a recount about the eruption of Vesuvius, 4.3 chopped up simple sentence and made them amazing! They added extra detail, adverbial phrases of time and even re-arranged words to see how sentences could be made better- well done!
Stratford Road, Birmingham, West Midlands B28 9AJ
enquiry@hallgrnj.bham.sch.uk
01214643840
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